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[Sunday
April 23rd, 2006
6:08pm
]

1121am
i wrote this last night 'cause i couldn't sleep:

her breath is caught in her throat.
the questioning numbs her heart; her head.
anxiety.
depression.
loneliness.
she's speachless; surprised.
her mute presence stings.
silence creaps from hidden corners& sits, perched, on everyone's lips.
she can't breath.
with one whack on the back, she takes a gasp of air.
some people just need,
to come back to life.
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[Sunday
March 19th, 2006
12:12am
]

_______thesex
I've been thinking a lot.
So here's a little personal free style poem.
I'm writing it now, so I haven't wrote it down somewhere. I hope you like?
Love hates, but love also lovesCollapse )
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[Wednesday
March 15th, 2006
10:17pm
]

_______thesex
[ mood | curious ]

I haven't done this in a while.
I'm not in writer's block anymore. So here's a poem I wrote, in school. Because I was bored.
I'm speechless, I'm speechless. Give me life, let me breatheCollapse )

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[Friday
February 24th, 2006
10:38pm
]

elmoismyfriend9
Uhm, I'm updating a few of my old poems, just to get osme opinions..




yeah, I was kind of mized up when I wrote that one. SO....yeah.





I was feeling really crappy when I wrote that....because my dad called and yeah





what can I say....I fent insane.

Yeah so three writes, enjoy, and comment please. I don't care if it's good or bad just leave your opinion Please? =/
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And her cries creep threw his ears. Hunting for screams he sent to her heart. [Sunday
February 19th, 2006
2:37pm
]

_______thesex
[ mood | cranky ]

I wrote a lot lastnight. Well early this morning because I couldn't sleep.
I also got a picture I kinda of drew with some sayings I made up. Well you can't really see because my camera is gay. I'm not finish with it. But it's not so great.

Let the letters burn a hole in your heartCollapse )
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[Monday
February 13th, 2006
5:13pm
]

elmoismyfriend9
as I took that last step
I let go of all the feelings
i had kept
the fear the sadness the love
and got on my knees and looked above

I asked god
why has it come to this?
Love is supposed to be a special bliss
but for me it's been failure mistakes
all anyone knew,
was a wonderful fake

so now my decision is made
I will make my life
come to an end
I can already see
my soul start to fade
and everybody's life
start to mend
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Hidden [Wednesday
February 8th, 2006
4:04pm
]

elmoismyfriend9
First poem, and all,
Title: Hidden
Author: Sarah manicom

with the sharpest item she could find
she was locked in her bathroom just to hide,
stared into space, so far
pulled down her sleeve
looked at her newest scar
the rest were deceived

pushed not to light
not to hard
to her tender flesh
her scar was her key
her card
and the blood was ruby red,
it was fresh

as she let go she saw
the drops start to pour out
dropped the item, with a pout,
she thought without a doubt
she wanted to shout

she knew this would be

her
last
night

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[Wednesday
February 8th, 2006
1:51pm
]

elmoismyfriend9
Hi, I am the creator of this community. Basically, the people in here write about life, and all of it, Please don't overpost on sick love poems, Yes love is a part of life, but we are looking at the darker side of it. You must join to post, and if you join Please, add a banner to your site. I will pretty luch add anybody who wants to become a member. Please don't critisize, unless it's a motivation Nothing like YOU SUCK! Because that's just bull shit, and I would personally like to see you write anything better.

alright well, there are the ground rules. Oh and most of all, write what you feel, don't be afraid.
WRITE

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